Thursday, February 4, 2010


Intro...
this was another creative writing presented to us by our all mighty great government teaching teacher Elika Dadsetan. The assignment was to imagine if the orange turban that the child is wearing was magical that could make the dog fly. I wrote this....enjoy

(This was my second story that wrote because i felt the first that one wasn't as "pleasing")
Barder and Timothy were 2 best friends. Timothy's parents got Barder when he as just a puppy as a gift for the family when he was just a couple months old.When Timothy was 4 they were inseparable. One day Timothy's grandpa gave him a "magical" turban hat if he whore it would grant him any power he wanted. One day Timothy and Barder were playing outside with the turban, Timothy remembered what his grandpa ad told him. Four and a half minutes later Tim was riding a 600 ft. tell fire breathing, laser gun using, red eyed, super strength, steel armored, English talking, predator missile shooting , flower pooping, robotic devil dog named Optimus Barder. They wreaked havoc through out the city. They destroyed everything in their paths. They were truly unstoppable. Then one day Timothy spilled some juicy juice into Barder, instantly killing and destroying Optimus Barder.
The End.

1 comment:

  1. I also wrote that the turban would grant the user any power they wished, it makes it easier to explain how the turban makes people fly. I will now go to sleep every night scared of this dog. At any moment a predator missle may come from the sky and destroy me. I hope you are happy.

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